diff --git a/config/locales/server.en.yml b/config/locales/server.en.yml
index a7036e518c0..73ec8e4c5b2 100644
--- a/config/locales/server.en.yml
+++ b/config/locales/server.en.yml
@@ -1470,7 +1470,7 @@ en:
 
         - For search, your user page, or the <kbd>☰</kbd> menu, use the **icon buttons at upper right**.
 
-        - Selecting a topic title will always take you to the next unread post in the topic. To enter at the top or bottom, select the date or post count instead.
+        - Selecting a topic title will always take you to the **next unread reply** in the topic. To enter at the top or bottom, select the reply count or last reply date instead.
 
             <img src="/images/welcome/topic-list-select-areas-2x.png" width="593" height="59">
 
@@ -1490,7 +1490,7 @@ en:
 
         <img src="/images/welcome/quote-reply-2x.png" width="326" height="128">
 
-        To notify someone in your reply, mention their name. Type `@` to begin selecting a username.
+        To notify someone about your reply, mention their name. Type `@` to begin selecting a username.
 
         <img src="/images/welcome/username-completion-2x.png" width="191" height="125">
 
@@ -1520,21 +1520,23 @@ en:
 
           - All topics less than **two days old** are considered new.
 
-          - Any topic you've **actively participated in** (by creating it, replying, or reading for an extended period) will be automatically tracked.
+          - Any topic you've **actively participated in** (by creating, replying, or reading for an extended period) will be automatically tracked.
 
         You will see the blue new and unread number indicators next to these topics:
 
         <img src="/images/welcome/topics-new-unread-2x.png" width="341" height="106">
 
-        You can change your notifications for any topic via the notification control at the bottom of the topic. You can also set notification state per category.
+        You can change your notifications for any topic via the notification control at the bottom of the topic.
 
         <img src="/images/welcome/topic-notification-control-2x.png" width="608" height="312">
 
+        You can also set notification state per category, if you want to watch every new topic in a specific category.
+
         To change any of these settings, see [your user preferences](%{base_url}/my/preferences).
 
         ## Community Trust
 
-        New users are somewhat limited for safety reasons. As you participate here, over time you'll gain the trust of the community, become a full citizen, and those limitations will be lifted. At a high enough [trust level](https://meta.discourse.org/t/what-do-user-trust-levels-do/4924), you'll gain new abilities to help us manage our community together.
+        As you participate here, over time you'll gain the trust of the community, become a full citizen, and new user limitations will be lifted. At a high enough [trust level](https://meta.discourse.org/t/what-do-user-trust-levels-do/4924), you'll gain new abilities to help us manage our community together.
 
     welcome_user:
       subject_template: "Welcome to %{site_name}!"