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Editing files on VMs
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Parts of the workshop involves editing files on the virtual
Parts of the workshop involve editing files on virtual
machines. The ``vi`` and GNU ``nano`` editors are available on the
VMs. If you are not familiar with ``vi`` or unsure what to use, you
VMs. If you are not familiar with ``vi`` or you are unsure of what to use, you
should choose ``nano``.
Example commands
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This guide contains many command examples. Some fo the commands are
to be exected on your host, others on either the ``server`` or the
This guide contains many examples of commands. Some of the commands
should be executed on your host, others on either the ``server`` or the
``client`` guest VM. For clarity, commands are annotated with the
host on which they are meant to be executed::
host on which they are meant to be executed, as in these examples::
$ echo "Run it on virtualisation host (no annotation)"
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Workshop feedback
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After the workshop please consider leaving feedback at
After you have completed the workshop, consider leaving feedback at
https://goo.gl/forms/P11DtfJiNq.