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* Update docs/sources/setup-grafana/set-up-for-high-availability.md

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Co-authored-by: Eve Meelan <81647476+Eve832@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Christopher Moyer <35463610+chri2547@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Chris Moyer <chris.moyer@grafana.com>

docs/sources/setup-grafana/set-up-for-high-availability.md

@@ -8,29 +8,34 @@ keywords:
   - HA
   - high availability
 title: Set up Grafana for high availability
+menuTitle: Set up HA
+description: Learn how to set up Grafana to be highly available.
 weight: 900
 ---
 
 # Set up Grafana for high availability
 
-Setting up Grafana for high availability is fairly simple. You just need a shared database for storing dashboard, users,
-and other persistent data. So the default embedded SQLite database will not work, you will have to switch to MySQL or Postgres.
+Grafana uses an embedded sqlite3 database to store users, dashboards, and other persistent data by default. For high availability, you must use a shared database to store this data. This shared database can be either MySQL or Postgres.
 
 <div class="text-center">
   <img src="/static/img/docs/tutorials/grafana-high-availability.png"  max-width= "800px" class="center" />
 </div>
 
-## Configure multiple servers to use the same database
+## Before you begin
 
-First, you need to set up MySQL or Postgres on another server and configure Grafana to use that database.
-You can find the configuration for doing that in the [[database]]({{< relref "configure-grafana/#database" >}}) section in the Grafana config.
-Grafana will now persist all long term data in the database. How to configure the database for high availability is out of scope for this guide. We recommend finding an expert on the database you're using.
+Before you complete the following tasks, configure a MySQL or Postgres database to be highly available. Configuring the MySQL or Postgres database for high availability is out of the scope of this guide, but you can find instructions online for each database.
+
+## Configure multiple Grafana servers to use the same database
+
+Once you have a Postgres or MySQL database available, you can configure your multiple Grafana instances to use a shared backend database. Grafana has default and custom configuration files, and you can update the database settings by updating your custom configuration file as described in the [[database]]({{< relref "./configure-grafana#database" >}}). Once configured to use a shared database, your multiple Grafana instances will persist all long-term data in that database.
 
 ## Alerting high availability
 
-Grafana Alerting provides a [high availability mode](https://grafana.com/docs/grafana/latest/alerting/fundamentals/high-availability). It preserves the semantics of legacy dashboard alerting by executing all alerts on every server and by sending notifications only once per alert. Load distribution between servers is not supported at this time.
+Grafana Alerting provides a [high availability mode]({{< relref "../alerting/fundamentals/high-availability" >}}).
 
-For instructions on setting up alerting high availability, refer to [Enable alerting high availability](https://grafana.com/docs/grafana/next/alerting/set-up/configure-high-availability/).
+It preserves the semantics of legacy dashboard alerting by executing all alerts on every server and by sending notifications only once per alert. Load distribution between servers is not supported at this time.
+
+For instructions on setting up alerting high availability, refer to [Enable alerting high availability]({{< relref "../alerting/set-up/configure-high-availability" >}}).
 
 **Legacy dashboard alerts**
 
@@ -38,7 +43,7 @@ Legacy Grafana Alerting supports a limited form of high availability. In this mo
 
 ## Grafana Live
 
-Grafana Live works with limitations in highly available setup. For details, refer to the [Configure Grafana Live HA setup]({{< relref "set-up-grafana-live/#configure-grafana-live-ha-setup" >}}).
+Grafana Live works with limitations in highly available setup. For details, refer to the [Configure Grafana Live HA setup]({{< relref "./set-up-grafana-live#configure-grafana-live-ha-setup" >}}).
 
 ## User sessions