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## XO-server
XO-Server is the core of Xen Orchestra. It's central role opens a lot of possibilities versus other solutions. Let's see why.
XO-Server is the core of Xen Orchestra. Its central role opens a lot of possibilities versus other solutions. Let's see why.
### Daemon mode
As a daemon, XO-server is always up. In this way, it can listen and record every events occurring on your whole Xen infrastructure. Connections are always open and it can cache informations before serve it to another client (CLI, Web or anything else).
As a daemon, XO-server is always up. In this way, it can listen and record every event occurring on your whole Xen infrastructure. Connections are always open and it can cache informations before serve it to another client (CLI, Web or anything else).
### Central point

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### [Redis](http://redis.io/)
This NoSQL data store is used by XO-Server to store persistent data such as users, Xen servers, …
This NoSQL data store is used by XO-Server to store persistent data such as users, Xen servers, etc.
### [AngularJS](https://angularjs.org/)

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## Introduction
There is two ways to install Xen Orchestra. If you are just a user and not a developer, please consider using the easier way (XOA).
There are two ways to install Xen Orchestra. If you are just a user and not a developer, please consider using the pre-built applance, as this is the easier way (XOA).
## Default credentials
Be advised that our default user and password for a fresh install are **admin@admin.net** and **admin**. Do not forget to change it to avoid troubles.
Be advised that our default user and password for a fresh install are **admin@admin.net** and **admin**. Do not forget to change it to avoid trouble.
## [Xen Orchestra Appliance (XOA)](./xoa_installation.md)

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# Installation on FreeBSD
This small guide is an addendum for installing XO on FreeBSD 10
This small guide is an addendum for installing XO on FreeBSD 10.
## Packages and Pre-requisites

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```
$ ./bin/xo-server
```
That's it! Go on your browser to the XO-Server IP address, and it works :)
That's it! Go on your browser to the XO-Server IP address, and it works! :)
## Misc

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# Xen Orchestra Appliance (XOA)
The fastest way to install Xen Orchestra is to use our Appliance. You can [download it from here](https://xen-orchestra.com/) (fill the form and click on "Try Now"). Basically, it's a Debian VM with all the stuff needed to run Xen Orchestra. No more, no less.
The fastest way to install Xen Orchestra is to use our Appliance. You can [download it from here](https://xen-orchestra.com/) (fill the form and click on "Try Now"). Basically, it's a Debian VM with all the stuff needed to run Xen Orchestra, no more, no less.
Once you got it, you can import it with `xe vm-import filename=xoa_version_number.xva` or via XenCenter.
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## XOA credentials
So far, system/SSH user and password are **root**/**xoa**. Be smart, change the root password as soon as possible!
So far, system/SSH user and password are **root**/**xoa**. Be smart and change the root password as soon as possible!
> For version of XOA < 3.6, user/pass combo in SSH is **root**/**root**. But we encourage you strongly to switch to the lastest XOA version (3.6)

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## Flat view
Flat view is non hierarchical view, with the main goal to serve the filtered results of the search field.
Flat view is non-hierarchical view, with the main goal to serve the filtered results of the search field.
Here is a example with an IP address: